Matariki
my matariki poem
Sky
Small pretty
Play crying pushing
Seven Sisters Stars matariki
Gliding fighting glittering
Magic trapped
myth
life ejacashin
I went to see Harold with my class it was very fun. if you go to Harold you should take your manase with you. Harold is with the life ejacashin. they go to schools and teach kids about the body. and at the end Harold comes out. they levye after 2 months and before they go they give out books.
Hi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteI like it, I like how you did a diamante poem. Next time you could add the learning intention.
Nice work
Hi charlotte
ReplyDeletei liked your post it was cool with all your detail and maybe you could check your punctuation like with no capital letters and you had no commers but apart from that it was good.
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI love your Matariki post but maybe next time maybe add capital letters and you have no comers like what Sacha said but overall Keep up the good work.
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI like your Diamante Poem. Maybe next time you could add a paragraph to your post and you could also add capital letters to your words. I also really like the way you added detail to your diamante poem. Also next time you could double check your punctuation to it.
Any ways BYE
Keep up the good work!